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57%
12 deviants said Raille
43%
9 deviants said AmayaKnight

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*Hapo57 Jul 1, 2009, 12:34:55 PM
SEE OISHIO'S JOURNAL: [link]
It's a writing battle. Please judge carefully on plot, grammar, character, etc.
The rest is in your hands, readers!

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*azulezircon Jul 1, 2009, 1:26:24 PM
Raille's entry was okay. While I enjoyed the main character, the sentence structure and grammar distracted me a bit. I can't comment on plot, really.

AmayaKnight's had a small hint of humor, and I kind of liked the characters. But I was really distracted by grammar, spelling, and the dialougue being jumbled together.

I voted for Raille.

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